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March 30, 2011
Autumn by ~adalaine is "A wistful and bittersweet poem that will both pull on your heart strings and inspire you. This piece is tragic and refreshing all at once. The technique is consistent and the ending is horribly lovely."
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Literature
On Ariadne
the loom of lust:
In the heart of your ears,
and till your outstretched feet
the spinner of mad red has corrupted,
her fingers like dragonflies threading
bark and twined grass into your hair
around your sure wrists, your angled feet
'this is love, my shining bride-to be,' you whisper,
and disappear with her among billowing black sails.
the abandonment of Ariadne:
He wooed you in a labyrinth of spinners,
and wed you in black sails, beneath jealous skies.
'Sleep and tomorrow you shall be Queen of Athens,'
Ariadne, sleep, tomorrow the sun will shine,
and the sea will ebb sympathetic away from
these deserted sands.
the death, or descent:
Spin,
Literature
distinction
This is what I cannot understand.
There is an understanding that nothing is ever black and white. Good can be achieved through bad means, what's wrong can sometimes be right, and if you turn right for long enough, you eventually go left. Boys can be girls who fall in love with girls who sometimes think they are boys and the lines between everything end up irreversibly blurred.
Or so I've always thought.
But this is a line that cannot be blurred. This is the only remaining clear-cut line that separates black from white as perfectly as a color wheel. And that is the fact that everything is until it isn't. We are until we aren't. We breathe u
Literature
Pocetna Stranica
In this drought-ridden land,
the Earth holds me captive and sucks me
dry; I can but watch, with withered arms,
as the stars drag at the night sky.
With van Gogh fingers
and an oil-stained tongue
my keeper riddles me sleepy clouds
and wide eyes,
painted caricatures of the perfect poem-
while I thirst and write and waste
countless graphite pencils
to an unheard cause, lost on
dumbed ears. My vocal cords shatter
a thousand stony seas, raze waves
and call the deep,
when all I want is that misty-eyes
Slovenian lake, a death waiting to happen
in outstretched, virgin arms.
This is my graceless fortitude,
a castle prepared for batt
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It's true of sunsets, Autumn, but not you.
written September 9, 2010
maybe these words qualify as "Scars" for #RawEm0tion
Dear #theWrittenRevolution,
Sometimes I feel I write poetry for myself a little too much, and my words become esoteric to a population of one - me. Do you understand what's going on in this poem? If not, do you have suggestions for how I could clarify things without destroying subtlety?
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this is beautiful <3