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Daily Deviation

Given 2013-11-05
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ChinZaPep Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
"... I fear if I don't hide everything between line
breaks and 
alluring alliterations that allude to always and for-never,
I'll spell out the stark memories of my future and leave myself
bare
without metaphors to hide my skin in,
hoping it will become a metamorphosis
and I'll become someone better."

This is uncannily -- I mean uncannily -- accurate and a perfect description of... me! I love this poem so much and I often come back to read it but this is the first time I realized how much I identify with it ;V; I really enjoy your writing and I can't wait to see more!
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adalaine Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
oh gosh, I'm very, very sorry for such a late reply! I'm so happy to know you really enjoy my poem and that you've taken the time to read it not just once but multiple times. I'm also happy to know you identify with it; I don't write so much anymore, but I think one of the main reasons I still occasionally do and then post them here is to hopefully find people who can connect with my poems. Thank you so much for reading my poem and for your comment! And also for adding me to your +watch! It all means so much to me and I truly appreciate it. :thanks:
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ChinZaPep Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Apologies for my late reply too!! ;O; School has been so busy...

Oh my gosh it's no problem!!! <33333 I really do connect with this and I look forward to reading more from you!! QvQ You are so welcome... you deserve all of that and more!!! ;u;
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adalaine Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
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animeOheart Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Lovely:heart:! :happycry:
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adalaine Featured By Owner May 13, 2014
thank you so much! I'm sorry for such a late reply, but thank you also for the +favorites, and even adding me to your +watch! it really means a lot to me :thanks:
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Impressive :) I think there is a lot of truth to it.
I can especially relate to the last stanza.
And prosetry sounds like a great word for something between a prose text and a poem o
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adalaine Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
thank you so much! I'm really happy you particularly favor the last stanza, as it's one of my favorites too. :heart:
(yes, I saw "prosetry" written somewhere on deviantArt in a random comment, and I like it very much so it stuck)
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome <3
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bumimanusiastock Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
very inspiring and so beautiful... I cry honestly... thanks for sharing it. congratulation on DD.. :hug:
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